Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Invisible Me

Once upon a time there was a boy called Tom. He lives in a tall building. He lives on the very top floor. He lives with his mum, dad and his little brother George.


Tom and George like playing games together.They play with toys, video games and running games. They have lots of fun playing together.

Then it was night."Good night." said mum.
"Good night." said Tom. "Good night." said George.

When it was morning, Tom felt a bit funny. He looked at the mirror, and he couldn't see himself. He went to mum.

 "MUM! can you see me?" exclaimed Tom.

"Where are you Tom?" mum asked. 

"Behind you!" he replied, worried.

"Oh NO! I can't see you!" exclaimed mum. Tom ran to dad.

"Can you see me?" asked Tom

"Who is that? What do you want?" dad whirls around holding a chainsaw.

"DAD, IT'S ME! TOM!" Tom shouted, afraid of the sharp spinning blades.

"Tom? Where are you? I can't see you!"

Tom almost fainted. He ran to George.

"Can you see me?" asked Tom. 

George's mouth fell open.

"GHOOOST!!!!!" he cried, and ran away.

"OH NO! So I AM invisible!" exclaimed Tom. "Well, it's not that bad because now I have invisibility, I can become a superhero!" 

" All the bad guys won't see me and I will be capable of beating them up very easily. But I still want to be myself." 

"I can't even take things but I can hit them," said Tom. Once he met the Three Stooges.

"They can help me," said Tom, "Hey, Moe can you give me back my old life where everyone can see me?"

"Who was that?" Moe looked at Curly, "why you good-for-nothing numbskull you! That horn I took in the ear's making me hear things!"

Moe tried punching him. His fist bounced off Curly's head and hit Tom in the gut, hard. 

"Ey, who's this guy?" Moe was staring right at Tom.

"You can see me?"

"Of course I can see you, what do you think I am, blind?"

"Maybe..."

"Why you..."

Tom dodged Moe's angry fists and ran away, visible again. He lived happily ever after.



5 comments:

  1. Wow!! The best story you have written so far. Love it. :D way to go!

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  2. I am speechless. . Where do you get all those ideas? You are so creative.

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  3. Very nice story

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  4. This is the kind of story I like most. Thank you Shayyan for writing this great story. I am sure you can write more.

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  5. Wow. what a nice story. Keep them coming.

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